Date: November 10, 2008 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay
Well, what can I say? Bloody hell....you are really good.
The writing is excellent, structure is dead on spot, and what makes me love your story probably most is how great and correct is the description of all characters ( I mean when you describe their face expressions, body language, reactions etc....I can virtually see Shane, Bette, Jenny and others in front of my eyes).
Great work!!! Really!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really does mean a lot to me. I'm hoping to get a new chapter out here soon, so look for it!
Date: September 14, 2008 05:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay
I just read this in one sitting, my first story on this board, actually, and I think you've captured the characters beautifully. I can just hear both Shane and Jenny's voices in my head.
Amazing job and I hope you continue with this, cannot wait to see what else happens, and how things are resolved.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you think that I've captured Shane and Jenny. That is actually the most important thing to me, keeping true to these characters. Thank you!
Date: August 14, 2008 04:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay
Awesome... I love it!
Date: July 11, 2008 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay
this story is so ...addictive!!! Great job!
Date: April 26, 2008 07:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay
this is something that i see could happen.
you must keep going :)
Author's Response: I'm hoping to update a chapter a week. Thanks for commenting!