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Reviewer: greenminicouper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay

Well, what can I say? Bloody hell....you are really good.
The writing is excellent, structure is dead on spot, and what makes me love your story probably most is how great and correct is the description of all characters ( I mean when you describe their face expressions, body language, reactions etc....I can virtually see Shane, Bette, Jenny and others in front of my eyes).
Great work!!! Really!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really does mean a lot to me. I'm hoping to get a new chapter out here soon, so look for it!

Reviewer: lust4amannequin Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2008 05:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay

I just read this in one sitting, my first story on this board, actually, and I think you've captured the characters beautifully. I can just hear both Shane and Jenny's voices in my head.

Amazing job and I hope you continue with this, cannot wait to see what else happens, and how things are resolved.

:)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you think that I've captured Shane and Jenny. That is actually the most important thing to me, keeping true to these characters. Thank you!

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2008 04:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay

Awesome... I love it!

Reviewer: bama81 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2008 07:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay

I love this story continue with the great work can't wait what happen next.

Reviewer: violka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay

this story is so ...addictive!!! Great job!

Reviewer: Surfsunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay

It also made me laugh quite a bit.
Please continue this!

Reviewer: DarknessDescends Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2008 06:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay

I loved this when you posted it over at l-word.com and MutedTempest and I talked and we both wanted to PM you and ask you to post it here! I am SO glad you did!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2008 07:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay

this is something that i see could happen.
you must keep going :)

Author's Response: I'm hoping to update a chapter a week. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: MutedTempest Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2008 09:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Don't Run, Stay

Well, I think you already know how much I like this one, but I'm saying it again because it bears repeating. I'm really glad you decided to post it here!

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