Reviews For Leave the Pieces
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Reviewer: amber2403 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 05:57 PM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous

So sorry this took me so long to review. I just started a new class for the summer so it's quite chaotic.

But I love what you have going so far... Is Shane thinking of moving too? I cannot wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: DarknessDescends Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2008 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous

I just read this again because I miss this story (even if it hasn't been that long since you updated it). Hope you can post something soon ^____^

Author's Response: I think I hit a block or something, but I'm working on it, sorry to make ya wait! Hopefully, the next chapter will be worth it.

Reviewer: lilpinkchainsaw Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 09:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous

Really great stuff! Can't wait for the next chapter! Nice to see Max talking with Jenny and supporting his buddy Shane - she needs somebody on her side, right now!

Reviewer: MutedTempest Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 05:16 AM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous

I'm so sorry I'm just getting around to this now, but this is so freaking great. And I don't want to babble like I usually do, so I'm just gonna leave it at that.

Reviewer: DarknessDescends Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 06:12 PM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous

Slow start? I think there's LOTS of stuff going on here! I was really excited to see that you posted a new chapter last night, but I couldn't read it until now because I had a ton of homework to do. Getting to read it now though was an awesome reward after finishing it, the characters are just so spot on and I really liked the references to ep 3x03 and 5x04 and that Shane confronted her "friends" about what they said to Phyllis. I've said it before and I'll say it again - it would be so cool if Ilene did something like this in season 6.

Author's Response: I thought it was really important that Shane confront Bette and Alice. Shane doesn't seem to confront many people about what they do or say, like her father. I think it is good way to have Shane start growing up and instead of running away from the things that hurt her, she faces them. I've been trying really hard to make sure that I write the characters as they really are. Thanks so much for the support!

Reviewer: albertay Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 04:41 PM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous

Nice update. I really like how you build up the suspense. You got me hooked for sure. Thank you!

Reviewer: schneeflocke Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 01:02 PM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous

wow, this is wonderful written. I really like your story you got me hooked. sorry for my english ist´s not my first language.

Author's Response: Thanks so much and your English is just fine!

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