Date: June 18, 2008 05:57 PM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous
So sorry this took me so long to review. I just started a new class for the summer so it's quite chaotic.
But I love what you have going so far... Is Shane thinking of moving too? I cannot wait to read the next chapter!
Date: June 01, 2008 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous
I just read this again because I miss this story (even if it hasn't been that long since you updated it). Hope you can post something soon ^____^
Author's Response: I think I hit a block or something, but I'm working on it, sorry to make ya wait! Hopefully, the next chapter will be worth it.
Date: May 21, 2008 06:12 PM Title: Chapter 4: Scandalous
Slow start? I think there's LOTS of stuff going on here! I was really excited to see that you posted a new chapter last night, but I couldn't read it until now because I had a ton of homework to do. Getting to read it now though was an awesome reward after finishing it, the characters are just so spot on and I really liked the references to ep 3x03 and 5x04 and that Shane confronted her "friends" about what they said to Phyllis. I've said it before and I'll say it again - it would be so cool if Ilene did something like this in season 6.
Author's Response: I thought it was really important that Shane confront Bette and Alice. Shane doesn't seem to confront many people about what they do or say, like her father. I think it is good way to have Shane start growing up and instead of running away from the things that hurt her, she faces them. I've been trying really hard to make sure that I write the characters as they really are. Thanks so much for the support!