Date: July 04, 2008 08:27 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Close to you
intense, and i enjoyed every moment of this pure love..im hooked on this story, and bette is a hooker ;/
Author's Response: Thanks, I don't know who this is, but I'm glad you liked it! And well, Bette sucks.
Date: July 04, 2008 02:20 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Close to you
Very intense chapter! The scene in the shower was heartbreaking. I just have to say I wanted to slap the Shitake mushroom out of Bette for being so..selfish! Great chapter!
Author's Response: The shower scene made me a bit nervous when I was working on it, but it had to be there and I guess it turned out kinda okay after all. And your comment about Bette made me laugh so hard when I first read it, and me and MT have started using that expression now XD Thanks!
Date: July 04, 2008 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Close to you
This chapter was wonderful, I absolutely loved it. :) The last part was so sad but sweet, and I especially the part where Bette was a bitch, and everyone was openly pissed off at her for being a bitch. Tee hee. That made me giggle. Nice work - even though you only just published this, I can't wait for the next chap! :)
Author's Response: Well, can you tell I don't think too highly of Dean Porter? XD She's just... urgh. I'm trying to get some work done on the next chapter, but I have no idea at the moment how long it's gonna take. Thanks for the review :)
Date: July 04, 2008 06:15 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Close to you
This was so hard to read - especially once it became obvious that even though Shane walked out of the hospital on her own two feet, that didn't necessarily mean she was okay - but so good! Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm worried about Shane's lungs :(
Author's Response: It was hard to write too, but at least it's all happening for a reason. Thanks for the support!
Date: July 04, 2008 02:01 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Close to you
Awwww, look at you writing a chapter as long as I usually post! lol. You already know that I love this. Thanks so much for letting me have the first look at this, I feel really privileged by it. The shower scene makes me cry every time I read it. You did a fantastic job as always.
Author's Response: Haha! That only goes for your Danish fics though! But yeah, it's like, your fault anyway, I think I caught the write-insanely-long-chapters bug from you *lol* And thanks, it's you liking it that makes me wanna go on.