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Reviewer: Muffin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2009 01:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 - If you're not there, there's nothing

your story is really great, i love the way you write, and even thought i'm not an english speaker i've found it to be very good written =)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm not a native English speaker either, but I try :)

Reviewer: ilovekc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2008 03:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 - If you're not there, there's nothing

Humor, sap, romance, and angst all rolled in one! My kind of chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you liked that one :) It was a pain to write :P

Reviewer: amber2403 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2008 01:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 - If you're not there, there's nothing

OK. So Chapter 2 was even cuter than the last!!

I am right about this "secret relationship" thing, though, right?

I know that they kissed in this chapter, but this wasn't their first kiss, right? LoL.

Well, I guess I'll just have to read and find out! :)

Author's Response: Well, yeah, they're trying to keep their relationship a secret. This chapter is a flashback to the night they took that final step and became more than just friends, and it was the first time they kissed as well. Hope that cleared things up a bit. Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 03:17 AM Title: Chapter 2 - If you're not there, there's nothing

i love it! the characterisation is so dead on. Adorable :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you!

Reviewer: saralin Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2008 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 - If you're not there, there's nothing

AWWWWWWW. The next chapter needs to be up, like, now! That was so sweet and perfect and ugh, now you have me addicted. :D

Author's Response: Thank you :D
I'm almost done with chapter 3, so hopefully it won't take too long! I just need to get everything going with the site first :)

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