Date: November 11, 2008 01:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Lacrymosa
I am not known for my prolific feedback but I simply have to let you know how moved I have been by this story and I very much look forward to reading more of your work.
I love the SHenny friendship and am open to more but what I like about this story in particular is how you have woven it into the canon of the show and gone some way to explaining away the extraordinary developments in the final episode of last season.
I also like how you have pulled in 'unpopular' characters like Jodie and Max and shown them in a more favourable (and interesting) light.
Please keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that has to be the sweetest review I ever got. I used to say I wasn't going to write a post-season 5 fic because so many other people were doing it, and they were great at it too, and there are only so many ways you can explain what Shane did. When I did decide to go for it I just wanted to do something that hadn't already been done before, and something I was sure Ilene wouldn't do. Jodi and Max definitely had their places in the story because I love them and I think they're definitely as misunderstood as Shane and Jenny are a lot of the time. I'm definitely writing more on this and I hope I won't disappoint as I go on!
Date: November 07, 2008 07:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Lacrymosa
I love this! You are always so creative with your fics and this is shaping into a great one! I can't wait to read more. I don't know why you were frightened to post this, it really is good!
(Do you think I can end anymore sentences with exclamation marks?! How about here..! Whew, I'm a dork. Oh... !)
Author's Response: Aren't I always frightened when I post something? I just am that way, don't know what to do about it. And thank you, I just don't want to do something that's already been done a whole bunch of times in one way or another because I tend to get bored. The quality of the result is a completely different story... And as for the last thing: they're fine! I don't mind the pointy things with the dots!
Date: November 06, 2008 04:08 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Lacrymosa
You are an amazing writer. I can't wait to see the outcome of this one and read more. =]
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully there won't be too many plot holes ahead for me to fall into O__o
Date: November 06, 2008 02:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Lacrymosa
You already know how much I love this, but I'm telling you again because you never listen to me. This is so freaking good, I wish you could see that. Seriously, this is incredible writing. You amaze me and I love you and stuff like that. lol.
Author's Response: Thank you, I think I needed that <3