Date: August 19, 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Swimming Pool
This is SO beautiful... I really felt it, I can't say anything else.. This is just perfect.
Date: November 29, 2008 09:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Swimming Pool
Wow, this is sooo beautiful... reminds me of something very very similar I've been through... when I had to act exactly like Jenny did in your story =) Love this story... Looking forward to next chapter =)
Author's Response: Aww thank you, and I've been there too. Kinda sucks, doesn't it? :/ Hopefully the next chapter won't take too long to complete!
Date: November 14, 2008 07:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Swimming Pool
I love how Jenny waits to act on her feelings, it shows how she wants to start things with Shane the right way. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks ^_____^ Now the big challenge becomes not messing everything up with the other chapter! XD
Date: November 12, 2008 05:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Swimming Pool
Boooooo! There should be pool nookie! I demand a recount! Or maybe a sequel ;D
Author's Response: I was just informed by my brain that there is indeed going to be another chapter, since 3 people told me there should be I see no reason to argue. Besides, Shane needs to have her say in this!
Date: November 12, 2008 04:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Swimming Pool
That was so good. =] I totally see no reason for you to ever be nervous about posting anything because with what I've read by you so far - there is absolutely NO reason for you to even think twice.
You're so good.
Author's Response: Thank you, you're so sweet I just wanna hug you.