Date: January 02, 2011 02:54 AM Title: Internal Struggle
When I read this, I kinda got surprised all of a sudden, because I realized I was reading a story, NOT watching an episode. Sure felt like I was, especially in the dialogue parts, and especially when Kit was involved. You write her better than anyone I know. You should teach me how to do that.
Date: December 22, 2009 12:10 AM Title: Internal Struggle
Awwwww! This was very true to character, and really well "fleshed out", as they say. Great development and description.