Date: July 20, 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For dear life
For Dear Life: The humor you injected into the middle of this chapter was a great relief. I let out a much needed chuckle. But as it went on, I realized that this story has far more layers than I first thought. You make me want to go back and watch Three Rivers. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks again! As for layers, if I don't have more than one thing going on in a story, I tend to get bored.
Date: October 23, 2009 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For dear life
This is a really great story so far!!! Keep on writing, I really to find out what happen!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I definitely will!
Date: October 04, 2009 05:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For dear life
This is frikkin amazing! I love this, you know I do. It’s aaaweesooome, and I swear, you’re gonna keep me from doing anything useful as I’m gonna be stuck reading this over and over again. You did an amazing job with this, all the time and energy you put into this really paid off. I really love David in this and I should probably feel slightly bad for poor SpongeBob, but Andy and David teasing him is always gonna be way too entertaining for me to do that. It must really suck to be Spongy. XP
You made me cry again! I feel so bad for Manda and David… and for Shane. I might just have to read it again and cry some more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3 It's kinda funny to me that you're calling her Manda, only Shane does that! XP And no crying allowed. Seriously. Laugh at Spongebob if it makes you feel better!
Date: October 04, 2009 04:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For dear life
This is really great and it's nice to see Miranda's side of things and how startling and unwelcome an element Shane is in her life right now, but at the same time she feels guilty because of how they left things with each other the last time. Shane, of course, wouldn't hold it against her, though - 'cause that's just how she is. I really was hoping for more time with Shane and Miranda, though, but I guess we'll be getting that in the next chapter. Can't wait to see it - really tremendous work - keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, there's a lot more of that coming up. Chapter 4 is a long one and it's pretty much nothing but Shane and Miranda and that starts where I left them in chapter 3. Just ended up deciding they needed a chapter to themselves.
Date: October 04, 2009 03:42 AM Title: Chapter 3 - For dear life
You already know that I love this and that I think it's amazing, but I'm telling you again because you never seem to believe me. I think your attention to detail in creating a backstory and a personality for these characters is awesome. You've done a really great job in making them human, from their interactions to their thoughts. This was very hard for me to read in places as I'm sure you know, but it's very well done. I really wish you could see how great a writer you are, because this is realistic and emotional and just plain great writing. You worked really hard on this and it paid off, and I'm honored I got to get the first look at it.
Author's Response: Well I tried. But it's so much easier when you know things about the characters and don't have to make it all up yourself, but I guess this is how it's gonna be with them from now on too, thanks to CBS. *cough* I'm glad they seem human, that's kinda the point, and I know some parts were hard and I'm sorry about that. Thanks for helping me with them in spite of that and thanks for the comment. And about the last thing... Since I started this site, have I posted anything without letting you read it first?