Date: March 24, 2011 01:42 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Together Alone pt 1
I love this story! Three Rivers was a show cut much too short, and I miss the L Word so much at this point...I've yet to find any shows that will replace either of them for me. This idea is very interesting, and I hope you continue soon.
Date: July 21, 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Together Alone pt 1
Together Alone pt 1: It's great how you are slowing revealing what's at the heart of Miranda's issues and it ties together nicely with what I believe the overall theme is.
This chapter was kind of hard to read because it seemed so personal; I guess that's the sign of good writing, when you can touch people in that way.
Can't wait to see how this all concludes.
Author's Response: It was hard to write too, but there's usually something in every chapter that's hard for me to write (whether it's because I don't know how to say something in English or because it's just too emotional for me) and this one was just longer than most so that might be why. But what you said really means a lot. And honestly, it's really sweet of you to take your time to comment on all the chapters and not just the last one, as you read through this and all that. Really, thank you. And as for a conclusion... it's not coming any time soon because I won't be able to stop this one until after at least 15 or 20 chapters or so and the next one shouldn't be too far from being finished.
Date: December 14, 2009 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Together Alone pt 1
Aww, poor Manda. Please update this soon. I'm really enjoying it.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the comments, I've got a lot done for the next chapter and I'm gonna try to finish it soon.
Date: December 07, 2009 08:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Together Alone pt 1
This was just a feast for my poor deprived fanhood. First Shane's story is over, then Three Rivers gets pulled, and my Moennig fix is gone. But wait! Miracle! Shane and Miranda both live, and their stories become connected in a brilliantly written way; one way better than the so-called pro writers seemed capable of.
Please please please continue this. It's like a drug, and I'm addicted.
Date: December 07, 2009 04:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Together Alone pt 1
This story is really good!!!! Keep it going!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm trying to!
Date: December 06, 2009 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Together Alone pt 1
You’re made of awesomeness, as is this chapter. I love Spongebob, and his tiny little brain cell (I’m gonna call his lonely brain cell Patrick, just for the fun of it), and I really love how stupid he is. He is hilarious and adorable no matter what he does, and Miranda helping him mess with David is kinda great. Yay for Shane and Manda! An awesome chapter with basically just the two of them, do I even need to say that it’s awesome? ;P It’s kinda nice that they’re bickering like hardly no time has passed at all. And the picture! Yay you!
How am I supposed to not cry when you write stuff like this? and yeah, both ships ftw! XP
I love this story, I really really do. And even though you know that, I’m gonna keep telling you.
Author's Response: So now I know why you named the brain cell that :P And what picture? I think there have been too many pictures mentioned in the last 2 chapters and I'm confusing myself more than Kate did when she watched Inception. And thank you, like lots.
Date: December 04, 2009 09:32 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Together Alone pt 1
You're a really fantastic writer, sweetie. I'm gonna keep telling you that because I know you don't really believe me, but this? Is totally supporting evidence. I love this chapter so much, it's real and it's heartfelt and sad but it's also funny and heartwarming in places. You did a really excellent job with it and I'm honored you let me read it first. it was definitely worth waiting for. I'm glad nano happened since it gives me stuff like this to read. You're amazing, and you need to start believing that.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I know I should have replied to this months ago, but I just couldn't... think about this chapter anymore at the time. I don't know how many hours or days I spent working on this, but I'm glad you liked it. Would have been a waste otherwise.