Reviewer: lilpinkchainsaw Signed
August 22, 2008
Chapter 5: As if the Stars Were Listening
This was really, really wonderful. I don't think it got all that repetitive, if you want to know the honest truth. I find myself repeating stuff a LOT in my work and I don't know - maybe it's a bad thing that I do it and I'm giving you the wrong advice? lol All the same, I don't think it was in any way distracting or that it took anything away from the story. The last chapter of this that I read before this one actually did make me cry. It just totally slipped my mind and I forgot to review and let you know. It really did, though. Well done! Now get started on the next one! ;D
Author's Response: Thanks muchly! I'm glad it wasn't distracting. I think it's just this type of story, I'm being deliberately vague with a lot of things so I keep trying to write the same basic stuff in different ways. And thanks so much for the compliment on the last one! I really appreciate it. I'll get started on the next one pretty soon.